"Okay, first thing I noticed is that the dialogue is pretty stagnant. If you woke up in a straight jacket would you say "Why am I here?"? I'm not sure what you were trying to do with the reverse film with the rope. Few good angles/effects. The weak dialogue and general acting kind of put me off. I'd like to see you..."
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Submitted: January 16th, 2006

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