Justin
"Balloon Fight" by SinFilms, llc - Reviewed on July 9th, 2007

Great music! Anything in the woods is pretty exciting. Whoa. I like the masks, even though they're creepy in a Eyes Wide Shut kind of way. What does this have to do with balloons!? I like that you caught some lightning in the shot at the end though.

Justin
"Championship Bowling" by Beach Bum Pictures - Reviewed on July 9th, 2007

That's a nice beach ya got thar.

Looks like some green screening on that background - ooh, green screening all over.

I wish my last name was Moonshine.

Bowling alley looks pretty dead, did you go in after hours, or is that just how Galveston is?

Crazy clothes dude has some crazy clothes. I respect that. I also respect long socks.

Some fancy triple-screening going on. I'd like if the voice overs for this interview segment were going on while the bowling was happening, since bowling is only so interesting.

Bowling scenes would have been better if they were editing together at a lightning-fast pace.

Damn, that's a serious fuzzy microphone! I don't think that's a stock windscreen.

Good montage at the mid-point, really dig it, the kind of pacing it could have used earlier.

STRIKE STRIKE .... 9. Ouch.

Are these random black screens on the background a mistake?

For the three strikes scene you probably could have played one strike footage three times over instead of just showing the bowl.

"Gaylord gave it to you hard" - scandalous!

Good pacing, Green screening could have been better, but not a huge issue. Could have used some better color correcting too, seemed like most of it was very dark. I know the bowling alley plays a big part in that, but upping the brightness in post still would have helped. Hopefully you had fun making it, I love bowling almost as much as making video :)