Steve Pappin
"Honey, I MONSTERIZED the Kids!" by Adam & Sean Videos - Reviewed on October 31st, 2007

you guys look like you're having a lot of fun. thats cool. all that really matters is that you have fun. just make sure your audience can have fun too. a little shorter and not SO wacky. ya know? but at least you submitted, thats a lot more than anyone else on this site can say.

Steve Pappin
"Honey, I Cloned the Kid!" by Gifted Goat - Reviewed on October 31st, 2007

I knew it. your technical abilities really raise you above the rest. the main problem i had with this one is that there weren't enough angles. ESPECIALLY with the fight scene. ESPECIALLY ESPECIALLY. Fight scenes should have all sorts of angles, close ups, POVs, slow motion, ect ect. Simply tripoding a fight scene doesn't fly with me. I'm glad you decided to kill them all, too...thats a good bit. "Aw shucks! Killed one too many" a secondary problem would be your use of the word "frickin" Thats a stupid word. ditch it or go the whole nine yards.

Steve Pappin
"The Children Seller" by Lunney - Reviewed on October 31st, 2007

Not bad. Change of scenery, lots of actors, costumes...wow. If you can manage to do this kind of thing with all the fights you submit, you'll always come off as impressive. at least in my mind. This is a full fledged movie, beginning to end. The only negative things are simply things i disagree with you on. just direction sort of things. like the skipping? not needed. overall, good job!