NickFiorentino
"Ted Steadmen Get's Writer's Block" by GilpinFilms - Reviewed on March 15th, 2009

Why are we a lightweight?!

NickFiorentino
"Ted Steadmen Get's Writer's Block" by GilpinFilms - Reviewed on March 15th, 2009

Alright thanks for the advice I'll definately have to fix that next time!

NickFiorentino
"Writers Block" by Break-Ah-Leg Productions - Reviewed on March 16th, 2009

The music worked on the parts you chose them for. At the beginning you showed frustration very well with the shots of your fingers and teeth and the spongebob scene was funny. Some of the shots I just think you over thought its not always about the fanciest shots, its about shots that make sense and shots such as the close up of the knife cutting the lettuce didn't make sense. I'll explain a little bit on this example in this scene the lettuce wasnt the focus the scene didnt even need the lettuce in it it was just something the mom was doing. If the lettuce had some sort of importance the close up wouldve worked but instead it throws off the focus of the viewer. Also some of the dialogue was a bit too napoleon dynamitish like fake stupid. It seems like a lot of people find it funny but in my opinion I'm just sick of videos where they over dramatize stuff like how awesome they are in ping pong.

NickFiorentino
"Writers Block" by Break-Ah-Leg Productions - Reviewed on March 16th, 2009

The music worked on the parts you chose them for. At the beginning you showed frustration very well with the shots of your fingers and teeth and the spongebob scene was funny. Some of the shots I just think you over thought its not always about the fanciest shots, its about shots that make sense and shots such as the close up of the knife cutting the lettuce didn't make sense. I'll explain a little bit on this example in this scene the lettuce wasnt the focus the scene didnt even need the lettuce in it it was just something the mom was doing. If the lettuce had some sort of importance the close up wouldve worked but instead it throws off the focus of the viewer. Also some of the dialogue was a bit too napoleon dynamitish like fake stupid. It seems like a lot of people find it funny but in my opinion I'm just sick of videos where they over dramatize stuff like how awesome they are in ping pong.

NickFiorentino
"Writer's Block" by Convergent Productions - Reviewed on March 16th, 2009

Awesome job dude what program did you use?

kaitron21
Replied on March 16th, 2009

Thank you!! :D

And I used Macromedia Flash 8 on my Macbook Pro.