Valentine's Day Haiku
Genre: Video HaikuRules: Create a Valentine's Day themed VIDEO HAIKU! A video haiku is a 3 shot film. 1st shot is 5 sec, next shot is 7 sec, final shot is 5 seconds. SEE EXAMPLES HERE: http://bit.ly/s34Fmc
Very creepy, mission accomplished. I'm a big fan of Black and White and I think it helped this piece out. Like everyone touched on, the sound was a little distracting for me. I know you were going for creepy, but it almost feels accidental. Aside from that, good stuff!
I always get a kick out of seeing indie shorts with subtitles. Not sure why, but for me it brings the cool factor. The zombie scene at the end was great, but I'd have to agree with Justin ... It was screaming for a little blasty blast action. Especially since we see the main guy grab a machine gun.
Fun entry, I enjoyed it.
Song choice was nice, great first shot of the guitar fret , lighting felt a little orange for my tastes, but the type was impossible to read. I would suggest fixing the type and swap out the youtube video. After watching it a few times, and picking up the haiku, it has a lot of potential. Deep stuff, good work!
meh I def would if I had the time and hadn't lost the capture files. I would have to re edit it all - I appreciate the criticism guys and I completely agree with everything you've said
"Bright Side of The Force"
by Piggs Productions
Genre: Any
| Group | Votes |
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| Piggs Productions | 28 |
| Two Guys and a Camera Films | 18 |
| Douglas Scott Films | 8 |
| Hayashi ninja | 3 |
| Jesse Gilbert Films | 2 |
Bright Side of The Forc
by Piggs Productions
Lightsabers have a whole new purpose...
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