Valentine's Day Haiku
Genre: Video HaikuRules: Create a Valentine's Day themed VIDEO HAIKU! A video haiku is a 3 shot film. 1st shot is 5 sec, next shot is 7 sec, final shot is 5 seconds. SEE EXAMPLES HERE: http://bit.ly/s34Fmc
Wow, there's an element of insanity to this that not only do I love, but I also applaud.
This idea is CRAZY, and I LOVE it. The goofy-ass look you gave to this psychopath is wonderful and the last line of the film, "I pray to God wherever his mind is now I hope he found it" is truly great.
This is a dark comedy, maybe not black but definitely gray. The directing is real good and the voice over work is fantastic. I haven't seen all the vids yet but i think this is my vote. Great job.
I feel I'm always too complimentary, so I guess one thing I wasn't thrilled with was the girl's voice in the end. I feel it could've been a little more...believable. Maybe it's the fact that the guy's VO's were so great she just kind of fails in comparison. She's not bad, just not on the same level.
Very basic direction, prob just you guys doing all crew work and placing cam on tripod? I've been there lol. Basic directing but the acting and chemistry is good so it works out ok.
Lots of great puns, love the over typing followed by the "dot com." HALLOWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEN!
Ooo damn nice effect at 4:55, very nicely done. HAHAHAHA that creepy guy with the cam is fuckin great! "Just act natural!" Haha that really won me over. Great vid guys.
I'd hate to say this, its one of my most hated criticisms, maybe it was a tad long? Maybe could've trimmed it a bit.
Ugh, i'm a damn hypocrite.
Man, Time Square is so beautiful. It's made for filming, can't have a bad shot there lol.
Really like the look at what people think. I admire you guys for going out there and getting these shots. NYC is such a wonderful place for the variety of people and opinions it represents and this is a nice piece in that respect.
Unfortunately, I love the idea, but you're up against some hysterical competition and I can't pass up voting for something that made me laugh.
Again, love the piece. I would've liked to see some more B-roll shots, I know they're quick snippets of dialogue but you're in such a great area I would've loved to get more surroundings as well as different types of dialogue shots. Not all extreme close ups, maybe a few craftier shots. Personal opinion.
Personal opinions are appreciated!
"Bright Side of The Force"
by Piggs Productions
Genre: Any
| Group | Votes |
|---|---|
| Piggs Productions | 28 |
| Two Guys and a Camera Films | 18 |
| Douglas Scott Films | 8 |
| Hayashi ninja | 3 |
| Jesse Gilbert Films | 2 |
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