Viperfang sucks. Forever. I want ot kill myself every time they enter.

This was solid and totally engaging. I haven't seen a film on filmfights that really draws you in like this that I can recall off the top of my head, yah know, ever. You win my vote, but more importantly, my heart.

You totally had me on board with the energy of the film from the get go. The films pacing, and really the punch line, for me got thrown off at the very last moments (the most important for this guy). You have all this energy, some good quick shots, etc etc, and then, it all sort of slows down. Their talking is still kind of fast, but after the energy of the running to the door and the counting down it seemed really weird. I think there could have been ways to show it was a mass suicide without having to have her say anything aside from "great we're too late" and then "BAM DEAD PEEEPS LOL!".

The lines afterwards "I still have the poison" etc etc, and them walking out I felt were unnecessary for the idea to really work. I dunno if you ever saw Nakedcastles stuff (back in the day) but what made those films work was just getting t the punch line and immediately cutting. I liked it though, just those last few seconds not being there I feel could have helped my enjoyment level.

I have enjoyed this film, and you guys are hilarious writers, please keep it up. I am a huge fan of snappy banter, and in turn, now a huge fan of you guys. never stop submitting, if you do I'll kill a cat.