Valentine's Day Haiku
Genre: Video HaikuRules: Create a Valentine's Day themed VIDEO HAIKU! A video haiku is a 3 shot film. 1st shot is 5 sec, next shot is 7 sec, final shot is 5 seconds. SEE EXAMPLES HERE: http://bit.ly/s34Fmc
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All right, I thought this was really hilarious! The man in the red shirt's timing and dialogue was very good and the energy from the man in the green shirt was also great.
I think the beginning was a little rushed feeling, but otherwise I really liked this! Looks like I have some competition . . . haha!
Great job!
-Ethan
Hello!
I thought this short was pretty good! I really felt the dog's personality with the narrations. I think it dragged on a little, kind of repeating itself a little, but nonetheless, a great little video. Loved the ending.
Hello!
I thought this short was good. It had its parts. I liked the music editing, it really set the mood. Some of the shots were extremely shaky though and I found it uncomfortable. Also, you didn't establish what was IN the suitcase or the reason why the two goons had it, which left me disappointed. Also, if you are going to have the character speaking with sign language, make sure he's saying something. Otherwise, I liked the look of it and the acting was pretty nice! Also, liked the costumes, can't go wrong with suits haha.
-Ethan
Thanks Ethan! The main thing was that we wanted to leave what was in the suitcase to the audience's imagination, as for the goons we referenced several times to how they were delivering it to someone but perhaps we could've built on that a bit more.
Thanks for your review!
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I thought this was shot and edited perfectly! One of the best edited shorts I've seen in awhile. I think some of the running shots dragged a little long, especially of the little boy coming home from school. Could have been cut down and I didn't know what I was looking at until he had his close up. LOVED the ending.
Looks like I have some competition!
-Ethan
Thanks so much! I definitely agree the kid walking home shot was a bit long, and I may edit down before I submit to some other fests. Thanks again!
Hello!
I thought this short looked really good. The shots were pretty good aside for a few and it felt very stylized which I enjoyed. I get the idea of the short, but the plot was not portrayed well. Still liked it.
-Ethan
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I really loved this short! All of the editing and shots were done very well and I found myself laughing quite a bit at the news announcer. I think the title should have been different from "Muted" though, seemed a little off. Otherwise, GREAT film!
Looks like I have some competition . . . haha!
-Ethan
LOVED THIS! The effects were great and I was laughing out loud most the video. I don't even care if I don't win, because this was great.
-Ethan
Thanks! I thought your film was awesome!
Hello!
Great job on the video! I loved the kill scene, the sound and visual effects were timed great and the music was a great choice. Some of the dialogue from the guy who died was a little choppy and some of the cuts were a bit long, but overall pretty good!
why thank you sir =) im glad to know you enjoyed it and thank you for watching my vid it means alot!! i will be sure to check you entries RedHandedRejects!!
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Pretty good video! The acting was pretty good and some of the shots looked all right. But the music didn't match most of the video in the beginning and I couldn't hear the parents talking.
Great little video though!
Ok, I've had lots of comments complaining about the music so I'm taking that in and hopefully that will be sorted by my next entry.
Thankyou for all the compliments though :D
"Bright Side of The Force"
by Piggs Productions
Genre: Any
| Group | Votes |
|---|---|
| Piggs Productions | 28 |
| Two Guys and a Camera Films | 18 |
| Douglas Scott Films | 8 |
| Hayashi ninja | 3 |
| Jesse Gilbert Films | 2 |
Bright Side of The Forc
by Piggs Productions
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