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"A Mission Of..." by Random Axe Entertainment - Reviewed on July 17th, 2010

I love the ending so much and im glad you didnt really go all out for comedy. I thought the pacing could have been a little faster though as i found myself thinking hurry up i want to see the next scene. Awsome location on the railway tracks and i thought your main actors face expressions where good.
All in all a good film with an awsome end

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Replied on July 20th, 2010

Thank you very much! Yea, we tried to get some really great locations. Medford here has some good ones. Thanks again!

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"Extinguish" by 17th Letter Films - Reviewed on July 18th, 2010

This film confused me. I read the Info but i could not see any prominant resemblances or metaphors to cencorship rebellion and submission.
Black and white really works for this film. I really like the shot at 00:23 its different and gets the message of his slow climb across. The shots of him when he reaches the top could have bee shot closer or on the ground to make it feel he is higher than he is therefore bringing a sense of danger and the feeling of is he going to jump!!!! HOLY ****! so yer.
At the scene change i got really confused, i dont know if this is a flashback to previous events making him want to jump. If so you could have added parts of the flash back needed in between the build up to the Jump.
at 1:19 i felt the actor should have seemed more confused and scared at where he has found himself, or maybe that his home!
Dialog wasnt bad and you had some great shots 1:50 for example.
had potential but i felt it was too confusing to understand. But nail that plot and your next film is bound to be awsome!

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"Muted" by Red Handed Rejects Productions - Reviewed on August 16th, 2010

Wow... there was some good stuff in this, good location decent enought acting, nice warm feel to this film. Ther were some out of focus shot and a rather radome shot a a chair? But there is some very bad use of tripods with lots of Jerky movments.
One change i would have made would be at the end after the guy grins and then she does if you had subtitles saying 'But im not going to go out with you'

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