Valentine's Day Haiku
Genre: Video HaikuRules: Create a Valentine's Day themed VIDEO HAIKU! A video haiku is a 3 shot film. 1st shot is 5 sec, next shot is 7 sec, final shot is 5 seconds. SEE EXAMPLES HERE: http://bit.ly/s34Fmc
I love the ending so much and im glad you didnt really go all out for comedy. I thought the pacing could have been a little faster though as i found myself thinking hurry up i want to see the next scene. Awsome location on the railway tracks and i thought your main actors face expressions where good.
All in all a good film with an awsome end
Thank you very much! Yea, we tried to get some really great locations. Medford here has some good ones. Thanks again!
This film confused me. I read the Info but i could not see any prominant resemblances or metaphors to cencorship rebellion and submission.
Black and white really works for this film. I really like the shot at 00:23 its different and gets the message of his slow climb across. The shots of him when he reaches the top could have bee shot closer or on the ground to make it feel he is higher than he is therefore bringing a sense of danger and the feeling of is he going to jump!!!! HOLY ****! so yer.
At the scene change i got really confused, i dont know if this is a flashback to previous events making him want to jump. If so you could have added parts of the flash back needed in between the build up to the Jump.
at 1:19 i felt the actor should have seemed more confused and scared at where he has found himself, or maybe that his home!
Dialog wasnt bad and you had some great shots 1:50 for example.
had potential but i felt it was too confusing to understand. But nail that plot and your next film is bound to be awsome!
Wow... there was some good stuff in this, good location decent enought acting, nice warm feel to this film. Ther were some out of focus shot and a rather radome shot a a chair? But there is some very bad use of tripods with lots of Jerky movments.
One change i would have made would be at the end after the guy grins and then she does if you had subtitles saying 'But im not going to go out with you'
"Bright Side of The Force"
by Piggs Productions
Genre: Any
| Group | Votes |
|---|---|
| Piggs Productions | 28 |
| Two Guys and a Camera Films | 18 |
| Douglas Scott Films | 8 |
| Hayashi ninja | 3 |
| Jesse Gilbert Films | 2 |
Bright Side of The Forc
by Piggs Productions
Lightsabers have a whole new purpose...
6,325 views6 reviews28 votes
Zag Yo Productions: Behind the Film Group
Many people wonder what's goes into the behind the scenes of newly started film ...
In the Church Basement
A small group of people seeks shelter in a church basement from constant werewol...