Valentine's Day Haiku
Genre: Video HaikuRules: Create a Valentine's Day themed VIDEO HAIKU! A video haiku is a 3 shot film. 1st shot is 5 sec, next shot is 7 sec, final shot is 5 seconds. SEE EXAMPLES HERE: http://bit.ly/s34Fmc
So I liked the 2nd half better than the 1st. I liked how you used black and white and the score at the end when he gets the pepsi. I didn't care for it ending in gunfire I think something could have been more cleverly done to get revenge and the cussing was a bit extreme. I always find a movie better if done with out profanity unless the situation actually calls for it.
Wow. I liked how this was put together the only critique I have would have been to tone down the music during the parents quick chat and picked it up againg when you see the boys again- so I could hear what was said. I like the pics of the father thinking about his son and the bluriness of the dr. and he comes to.
Thankyou, I'll try and improve the audio for my next entry.
That was funny and I haven't even see the movie that inspired this idea. Loved the dialogue as well. I would have liked to see an original score with it but all in all put together well.
Funny! Loved the annoying the other person- would have liked to see some different angles and a close up even during the part where he hits the guy. Loved the revenge part of it. Sound fluctuated quite a bit and you kind of took the total mute out but still a great story.
Interesting idea I must say. Very well executed. Loved how he was able to mute her and the tribute to Toy Story and FilmFights. Hope to see you again in another fight. A critique? Try to get a tighter close up in some shots, and her crossing the bum could have been a bit quicker. Def thumbs up!
So I am creeped out by the hand in the closet handing him whatever it was- I was very focused on the hand! Interesting idea kind of disappointed by the talking in the end. The trying to talk and feather coming out was great.
Thought it was creepy in a funny way- the library guy up in her face I would have screeched or maced him. Would have liked to see a couple more people in the library so he isn't just picking on her the majority of the time or the nerdy guy putting him in his place. Good changing of angles and lighting.
I loved how he kept smiling through the sales pitch I couldn't stop laughing- thank goodness my popcorn ran out otherwise I think I may have choked. Great actors. Sound quality could have been better but great short.
I loved the opening of the dogs face and the story being narrated. Wouldn't focus so long of the dog's bowl could have put something else in there but looking forward to seeing what you do next.
Interesting and well told story- wondering what is in the briefcase. Liked the action shots and use of mutiple locations.
Confused by what is happening and how the tape fits into it. I like the score and black/white. Interesting shots you got as well.
Great, Great. Actors. Loved the run to catch up to her to return her purse. Her walk seemed a bit awkward at times. Ending to the story was the best part. Loved the scenic part of the movie.
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I am not one for cursing unless its really necessary to the film and I didn't feel it was, thought more witty comments could have filled it. Love the actors and corniness of the film. Funny.
Nice originallity using animation vs live action. Great lip syncing. Would have liked to see the cardboard man transform into a man, didn't find the box threatnening.
Didn't care for most of the cursing, I could understand putting it in once. Great actors and shots of her bound.
lol sorry for the cursing, and thanks!
What cereal is that is looks disgusting.... lol. Funny and entertaining, like the acting and great underwater visuals of the gunfire through it. Good ending.
Liked the silent attorney's dancing arguement, funny.
Courtroom seemed more like people playing dress up in someones living room. Would have liked to see a better courtroom.
The shirt ripping was halarious!
LIked the music cutbacks between what he was hearing out and everything behind him and his obliviousness to it all. Would have like for the friend to react to what he just walked through. Very nicely done.
"Bright Side of The Force"
by Piggs Productions
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