Gas Station HaikuGenre: Video Haiku
Rules: Make a haiku that takes place at a gas station! A video haiku is a 3 shot film. 1st shot is 5 sec, next is 7 sec, last 5 sec. Examples: http://bit.ly/s34Fmc
Fantastic. I'm a huge fan of Grindhouse movies and their trailers alike. This is definitely the most accurate entry. Love the female, great line delivery. And of course, the narrator is fantastic. Over use of the title is classic Grindhouse trailer. A very well put together piece.
Love the beginning shot. Great car, little details like that help the overall effect. Acting isn't the best, especially with stiff competition. (I used "stiff" in a totally non-gay way.) Shots could use some tightening up. Also, your shots are too long. Make them snappier for an action packed trailer.
"There's hot chicks, guns, guns, and more guns! And zombies!!!!" That's classic. "Don't fuck with Nickelodeon" haha another classic line. I like the actor playing Diego. I was unconvinced that Dora the Explorer and Grindhouse cinema are a good match when I hit play. And when the video stopped, I was equally unconvinced.
Easily the most inventive piece submitted. This was really fantastic. I love the red bricks as blood when the car smears him across the ground. A really nice Grindhouse plot line and excellent use of Legos. It's a tough call: "Out-Law" for taking the cake with originality or "Brain Melt" for being the most accurate Grindhouse trailer submitted. Well done, Filmyguy! I think you have my vote.
Really well done, luv Lego animation and u took it to the edge, job well done.
The girl dropping her panties only to get blown away was fantastic. The actor playing santa was wonderful. Perfect. One scene that stands out to me is the street fight where santa has no shirt on and the suspenders. It felt like perfect casting on all characters. Well done!
Nice tag line! Love the music, the house was great looking. But the things that suffered were acting and effects. Cheesy blood splatter and some awful line delivery "how do I get outta here?!"
Wow, nice limb cutting scene! There are some very disturbing shots but overall this has the feel of a iMovie combined with a music video. The narrator's lines are tough to hear. I liked the song choice.
btw, what is the song's title?
I'll try anything once
Hshaha rockin out killer. Man you stabbed the shit out of that pillow! Irish cowboy is fantastic as well as the woman screaming in the beginning. The shots of the hooded killer are so AWFUL but hysterical! He's great. Man, that sums up this piece for me. It's got some real plain shots but it's overall extremely entertaining. Well done!
Cutthroat's lines are great. Good song choice. Oh jesus, talking popcorn container. I was about to ask why this isn't HW until that lol. "Time for popcorn to pop a cap," NICE. Oh man, the quality of this is easily HW. I wish the plot had the same amount of thought put into it.
Lots of copyright songs used in this fight. Kids driving cars, love it. Nice fake chainsaw! Needs sound effects!
That first shot is fantastic! Haha he's a lover and a killer. Nice shots, def a cheesy effect with the scratches over layed. Nice piece though with good narration.
Hahaha "live at the latest murder scene" the idea of filming a news report with the body still lying in a bowl of cereal is awesome.
Fantastic narrator! Reminds me of Eli Roth's "Thanksgiving." I like the audio popping sound effect, that's really nice. I'm hating the use of the blood spatter in after effects everyone is using. I'd have like to see more use of on-set blood. But I know how tough that is.
Yes, thank you. That is exacly what I was going for, Thanksgiving. And I agree, after effects blood is way too over used. I'm trying very hard to move away from it.
Like the cat in the beginning. Just a couple of buds hanging on the porch. Haha cheesy frog field effect was great. The use of a silenced pistol after a machine gun is gold. Hahahahaha big frog monster is fuckin awesome! This was surprisingly cool. One of my top middleweights for sure. Well done!
Haha love the title. Real nice location and good lead male. Audio is obviously awful but I'm a huge fan of you actually using little to no after effects, just classic horror technique. Well done! I like this a lot truthfully, I'm not in agreeing with it's LW class. Easily a MW.
by Noreaster Films
by Noreaster Films
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