Bagel HaikuGenre: Haiku
Rules: Make a video haiku that has a bagel in it...A video haiku is a 3 shot film. 1st shot is 5 sec, next shot is 7 sec, final shot is 5 seconds. SEE EXAMPLES HERE: http://bit.ly/s34Fmc
I liked the shave cream can doing the censoring for you in the shower scene the best.
Yeah I loved when I did that i thought it was the greatest idea I had lol
It's pretty funny :) haha
Unique style. It seemed to drag a bit for me in the middle. The skull was a nice touch as well.
Great Cowboy dance! It's cool when you can get assets like a shoe store to cooperate.
Great chain saw prop! You have good story telling skills, but you needed a real old man to make it work. Try concentrating on stories about kids.
I knew what was coming, but you hid it well. Wish that thoat scene had been more in focus. I'm glad this lady is in New Jersey...she's really twisted! Good writing!
Very good acting and music. The last scene just didn't fit for me. Kill his wife and turn him lose? Lastly, turn in on time! You had a lot of good things going on in this film.
Thanks Yellowtractor we appreciate your kind compliments. Yeah it didn't work for me either. I might bring out an extended cut with the ending I wanted. Keep checking INFUSEDFILMS.COM for updates.
I liked this story! Great twist at the end. The button prop could have been better and some of the dialogue audio was a bit hard to understand in the beginning, but you worked around the shortage of actors very well! Submit on time!
Thanks for your comments. I will definately try to improve Audio and the Props next time.
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