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"Coloring with Jesse. " by Jesse Gilbert Films - Reviewed on January 5th, 2011

I think the quality is very good! It has a very cinematic quality, which I don't think lends itself well to the format though (70's TV show.)

Also, you might want to speak a bit clearer next time, I understood what you were saying, but it came out as rushed!

The last thing is just a personal note: I thought the humor was a little too blatant. Less can be more! Try to make it a bit more subtle, and maybe it will play better. But that's just me.

Overall, a solid contender! I'm glad you submitted, and can't wait to see more! I hope to see you around!

- Griff

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"Romper Room " by -Xzkape Productions - Reviewed on January 5th, 2011

It seemed a little too "improv" for my tastes...

The crying you mixed in after the girl gets hit stands out a bit, I could tell it was fake. Sound is the most important thing!

The cinematography needs a bit of work in my opinion. It wasn't bad, but it was a little bland.

Overall, it's just little things that need fixing up! Thanks a lot for submitting! I hope to see more from you!

- Griff

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"Banana Show!!!" by VIPERFANG - Reviewed on January 5th, 2011

You want me to vote for something, vote fo' my NUTS!

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