You Make Me SickGenre: Comedy/Horror
Rules: Your main character has to say at some point, 'You make me sick!' and then immediately vomit. What could have happened to make such a gross remark? You decide!
Liked the feel that we are inside her head or this is her last thoughts as she passed on. Felt the fight was a bit like a push and could benefit from a bit more of am umpf. Not sure if the end murder was needed, maybe just lingering on one of those final shots for a long time to put the viewer at unrest would of been cool, like the blood on his face. Liked the symbolic cutaways like the paper hearts being pulled of the string.
Loved the tilt up from the pool of blood, Might of been interesting to see that before the face of the person puling him, to allow the audience to question who would be pulling the body bag before it is reveled.
After seeing him look right in to the camera, was expecting to see him commenting on his thoughts, maybe if we saw a inner monologue could of been interesting.
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|8Bits Of Fun||5|
|Poorly Animated Cartoon Violence||3|
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