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"Waiting" by NewBreedFilms - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Really enjoyed the premise of this entry. Wasn't sure where it was going, but loved the payoff at the end. The audio cuts were a bit jarring. The music felt like it shouldn't have cut with the scenes as much as it did. Nice work NewBreedFilms, welcome to Film Fights!

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"Don't Cry For Me" by GriffinProductions - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Shots looked good, and the actress was believable. Wasn't expecting the black veil. All and all good. I think the phone call at the end could have sounded better/more realistic. Nice work GriffinProductions!

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"Night In" by Night In - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Really enjoyed this. Great shots, loved the ending, very unexpected. Around 30 secs the actor looks at the camera, got to watch that. Great short story and well executed. Welcome to Film Fights!

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"Metastasis" by Constance Production - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Loved that it was one shot, and how the scene played out. The audio here needed work. The main actor's voice over didn't sound like it was in the room, so it takes you out of the realism of the film. Also, the lips didn't match the VO at the end. Nice work Constance Production, hope to see more from you guys!

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"The Chimney Sweeper" by The Chimney Sweeper - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

So well shot! Nice colors and shot variation. Audio at the beginning is a bit too quiet. What a great location! Hope to see more from you in the future!

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"Shoot the Bird" by Shoot the Brid - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Loved the twist! All the shots looked great and felt right for the scene. Last jerk at the end added to the comedy. Great work!

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"Waiting" by pre production waiting - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Wonderful shots and great locations! Look at that moon! Light and hair bounce scene...loved that sooo much! Keep submitting!

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"THE TAKE DOWN" by Lucky Dog - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Lighting was wonderful. That beard was sooo bad, lol. Great ending joke. Loved that you only tipped a dollar to the guy you knocked out. Welcome to Film Fights! Your main actor looks like the same guy from the bird watching short in this fight? Are you all in the same school?

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"Waiting for Violence" by Poorly Animated Cartoon Violence - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

So much self promo! lol

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"Typing" by DanoDigitals - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Nicely shot. I think had the audience seen more of what the text was about it (like some personal deep thing) and too get the response would make the payoff funnier. Great job though! Glad to see you guys back!

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"Tough descision" by scad preproduction 115 - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Welcome to Film Fights. Enjoyed the opening to the film. Would have liked to see more with the tattooed guy. Audio need some work, and the ending seemed rushed. Hope to see more from you guys!

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"Family Reunion" by Shelbie Warner - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Having more backstory about the relationship with the father might have helped the tone make sense. Was the main character waiting to meet his father that he rarely sees or just pick him up? The ending was really abrupt as well. Nice work guys!

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"Rehearsing" by Diaz Production - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Instead of having your actor say what they should be doing, show it. The audio had some weird fast forwarding sounds that seemed ill placed. Hope to see more form you!

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"The Traveler" by mdamat2ogroupname - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

I don't see how this is waiting for anything. A scary idea for a short though and great location.

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"BAETYL " by MATEO_PRODUCTION - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

I don't see how this is waiting for anything. Nice sets and use of locations. Great lighting in the woods. GLOWING ROCK!!!

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"Waiting For Death" by classic - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

The main character is sad that his girlfriend/wife died. I think showing him somberly going through life without her would make more sense with the title. Good idea, but need some work to make it interesting for your audience. Welcome to Film Fights!

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"Tootorial" by Hatbox Productions - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

The audio was really low. Silly ending, fart jokes! Welcome to film Fights!

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"Waiting " by Qing Gan - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

No need for opening and closing credits in these type of shorts. The door gag would have worked better if the audience didn't realize it wasn't a real door. Keep it up!

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"Hear Your Voice" by BackBurner Films - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Great opening shots. The pacing in the kitchen looked too planned. If you are waiting for a call from kidnappers wouldn't you be right next to your phone, and how would you really react. Always try to have your actor's put themselves into the thoughts of their characters. Nice work!

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"EHH EHH EHH" by Zang Productions - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Music didn't match the film. It slowed what should have been a fast-paced comedy/action story. Thanks for submitting!

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"Est. Time of Departure" by CBirley - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Loved how all the shots changes. Didn't understand the premise. The opening should give a clearer indication of what's happening (why is her time ending). Nice shots and locations!

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"Rocks in Softer Places" by Rocks ROCK - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Great characters, but the story was lost on me. The rocks with eyes, lol. This was so weird, but I love it! Reminded me of Twin Peaks for some reason. :)

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"Check-Halt" by C.O SOETAN PRODUCTION - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Welcome back gents! That delivery guy is the saddest delivery guy ever, lol. Audio needed some work. Also, would have liked to hear the main guy maybe toy with his opponent, to make it more interesting of a film.

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"the no-data dumps" by MacLab2017 - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

I didn't get it at first because I have unlimited data. I think having something else happen in the film to make it more interesting would have been good. Thanks for entering!

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"release" by Sea Breeze Productions - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Really thought he was going to a meeting/interview. Funny gag, but felt like it needs more to be well rounded short.

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"The Results " by Cassie Lee Productions - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Open ended! Nice work, not sure I could eat while waiting for those rexults though, lol.

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"Waiting" by Karlee King Film Fights - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Great location and nice use of shots. I think some dialogue might have been good for this short though. Like maybe 'Hey Johnny, why did you tell me to meet you here' or something. Nice work!

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"Ignite" by ZZZProduction - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

GREAT LOCATION! The audio was too quiet. The lighting at in the last shot didn't make sense for where they were looking. Should be looking down to see the car. Nice work though!

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"The Stare Down" by Twenty - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Not sure how this is waiting. You guys had fun playing with those Sound FX though.

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"Milkshake" by Clea - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Really enjoyed the lighting and style of this short. Only thing I felt it needed was more too the story. What a match at the end!

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"WAITING" by LoveOrLust - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Great text on the screen, but make it large enough to be read. Thanks for submitting!

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"enjoy the risotto" by trivial - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Not a lot to this. Make it a story. Show someone wanting to eat it. Keep it up!

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"Waiting" by The Film Fighters of Savannah - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

The audio was way off from actor's mouth. What a strange ending, complete change in tone. Nice work though!

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"cat" by Yizheng's film - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Not enough for this to be an interesting short. Why is the cat waiting?

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"Waiting" by Weird Shit - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Why is she waiting for death? Show us, so it can be interesting for an audience to watch.

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"Worth the wait?" by MacLab2017 - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

The audio was jarring and didn't match up at points. Goof idea, but needed more work.

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"The wait" by Linsly bet - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Make sure to add the FF logo!

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"waiting for disaster" by Smiley Face Inc. - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Needed more storyline.

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"Next Bus" by Rockfish films - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

Always enjoy your entries Rockfish! Some weird artifacts from your greenscreen happening. Liked the gag at the end. That bus is never coming. :)

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"Do You Pee Here Often?" by Tankbogem - Reviewed on May 17th, 2017

The idea is cute, but didn't feel believable. I think them having awkward conversation would have made for a better story. Then show the reveal of why they are still talking.

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