Valentine's Day Haiku
Genre: Video HaikuRules: Create a Valentine's Day themed VIDEO HAIKU! A video haiku is a 3 shot film. 1st shot is 5 sec, next shot is 7 sec, final shot is 5 seconds. SEE EXAMPLES HERE: http://bit.ly/s34Fmc
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You got some nice shots- good use of cinema, but carry it on throughout. Work on use of blending the slow action with the fast action, ie: shots/edits going into the action are loose while the action is tight. Make it tight throughout the whole thing. But I'm just being picky because your sequences show you have the abilty.
Also- lighting would put you into another category. You have a nice flick here, but with better lighting it would step it up a notch. overall, great film. I give it an 8.5/10
Wow- stepping to the plate. i loved this. Nice use of effects, great story concept. I believed it. Acting was pretty good, I actually felt bad for you sitting alone on the couch, yet surrounded by friends. And it was full of laughs. 9/10. Found it beat the competition in regards to story.
Only major critism- there were times when a tripod would have helped.
"Bright Side of The Force"
by Piggs Productions
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Bright Side of The Forc
by Piggs Productions
Lightsabers have a whole new purpose...
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