Valentine's Day Haiku
Genre: Video HaikuRules: Create a Valentine's Day themed VIDEO HAIKU! A video haiku is a 3 shot film. 1st shot is 5 sec, next shot is 7 sec, final shot is 5 seconds. SEE EXAMPLES HERE: http://bit.ly/s34Fmc
Some nice editing in this one, I really like the split screen. The only problem is that it seems like it's just too dark - even brightening things up in post would have fixed a lot of that problem.
"Where's my cookies at!?" < found that line funny. Great use of the FPS shots in the cookie search montage - more effective than cutting around from a bunch of different angles. More panicky and exciting.
Where are you guys from? Somewhere midwest? Sounds like Ohio or something. Awesome shots at the bar, really beautiful how you can make things look with some nice lighting like that.
Poor guy ain't got no cookies :(
Bar had a couple shots too many, but only one or two, nothing that's too bad. What kinda camera was this shot on?
Kick that garbage can's ass!!! Wonderful destruction.
The penis face - perfect revenge. Entertaining film! Wonderful entry!
Rex! You've got such a solid, excellent style. It really shines through in this one, very Rex-esque. How did you guys get all that smoke in there?! I wish that line from Griffin was redubbed "Hey guys whats going on" - maybe you could have used a different voice, a sexier voice (if that's possible). Plus it's a tad hard to hear.
Nice fade to black, but it could have worked better if it was fading out from your POV, since it comes back at your POV.
Eek, dust on the camera lens, isn't that crap annoying when you're shooting into direct sunlight.
Perfect music when you open the door to reveal Griffin filming the movie. All the POV shots are nice. Haha, Griffin's a great actor, really shines in this production.
The wind works for me in the filming scene, kind of adds to the ambience of it - Rex is in this quiet sad place and everyone else is in this noisy blustery place. Good juxtaposition or something.
Hey I think I saw those bags in a Fandago commercial.
ADAM COOK I LOVE YOU. LOVE LOVE. I must meet you someday. Wonderful hair too.
The real coup de gras at the end is the scenes from the movie that griffin and the others were shooting - is that only in the extended version or something? Didn't see it in this one.
All in all, one of the better films I've ever seen on the site. Right up there with 'The Room' NICE WORK!
"Bright Side of The Force"
by Piggs Productions
Genre: Any
| Group | Votes |
|---|---|
| Piggs Productions | 28 |
| Two Guys and a Camera Films | 18 |
| Douglas Scott Films | 8 |
| Hayashi ninja | 3 |
| Jesse Gilbert Films | 2 |
Bright Side of The Forc
by Piggs Productions
Lightsabers have a whole new purpose...
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