Valentine's Day Haiku
Genre: Video HaikuRules: Create a Valentine's Day themed VIDEO HAIKU! A video haiku is a 3 shot film. 1st shot is 5 sec, next shot is 7 sec, final shot is 5 seconds. SEE EXAMPLES HERE: http://bit.ly/s34Fmc
This was humorous.
But, was it a dream. Maybe you could have done like a ripple effect when he was sleeping to segregate dream from reality. It just didn't seem like a nightmare.
Great editing. Lighting was right on and visuals were interesting.
I didn't understand your concept until you explained it in the forums. So it wasn't really clear on what you were trying to show.
It was good over all.
It was an interesting film. Opening shot where the corn blew in the wind rocked!. It would be cool to see him get lost in a wind storm.
The 1st person perspective is great. Some angles were a little weird and editing was kind of choppy.
Sound wise it was okay. The corn rassling kinda annoyed me. You could have probably treated it as a foley so you can turn it down. it was kinda loud.
Good Job!
This concept was cool. I like how the camera switches focus in the convos instead of jump cutting to each person in editing. Sound was pretty good.
The whole switching thing is great. It did kinda got repetitive and you could have probably done away with the car scene. Just cause it didn't look like he ws going to hit him at all.
By the way is that jones soda? If it is, i didn't know you could get drunk of off it.
I liked this.
I'm trying really hard to like this, but it's not going to well.
There is a lot of great shots and the whole cord thing was cool effect. They used the same effect in the very first "evil dead" when the tree raped that one girl. So anything that pays tribute to "evil dead", i'm going to like. So i liked that scene.
It was reall just hard to get into and you just used one angle.
It looks good though.!
I liked this, i thought it was funny when the guy over exagerated putting the tooth bruch is his mouth. The whole blood thing worked out well.
good entry
This movie made me want to watch "Saw". It moved really slow, but nice touch on the voice over. The ending was good too when the guy pops out.
You should have used sometype of rope for his bindings. The long sleeve shirt wasn't working out for me. The head shaking was cool, a little long but cool nontheless.
Good job Dave.
"Bright Side of The Force"
by Piggs Productions
Genre: Any
| Group | Votes |
|---|---|
| Piggs Productions | 28 |
| Two Guys and a Camera Films | 18 |
| Douglas Scott Films | 8 |
| Hayashi ninja | 3 |
| Jesse Gilbert Films | 2 |
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