Valentine's Day Haiku
Genre: Video HaikuRules: Create a Valentine's Day themed VIDEO HAIKU! A video haiku is a 3 shot film. 1st shot is 5 sec, next shot is 7 sec, final shot is 5 seconds. SEE EXAMPLES HERE: http://bit.ly/s34Fmc
This was very intriguing. You had some really great shots, overall the sound was decent, and the acting was well done.
However, I'm kind of confused with the premise of the movie. What I got was (and I could be wrong) that the 2 guys were actually one in the same. Or... they all three were the same person. I think the storyline/twist could have been more conclusive to help the retarded viewers like myself. :)
I like the color adjusting you had done with many of the clips. It gave it a gritty, overexposed feel to it. It helped the tone of the movie.
The choices in music were also a good touch, too.
Overall, a really strong entry. Great job and glad to see you still making these!
The video has some sort of crazy pixelation going on. Im not sure if its a compression thing or a dirty tape head thing. Not a criticism, just an observation.
Some of the cuts were extremely abrupt.
The story was mildly funny. Im guessing the banana is an inside joke thing because I didnt get it at all.... or what it had to do with the evil mini ghost in the closet.
The sound was probably the best thing about the movie. It picked up relatively well, considering the environment you were shooting in.
Overall, a pretty good entry!
Whoa! Cool animation! Its like really cool CAD work or something!
The main character is like a really tough Gumby. I like him. He looks awesome. Im guessing he shot the fly with a gun and ate it for lunch. Strange... but hey, it looked cool!
Overall, the most unique entry this week fo sho!
That was entertaining. You had some basic technical problems, but overall you pulled off a fun little movie. Good to see a new face in the FFing ring. You definitely had an interesting take on the theme for this week!
The dialogue needed to be boosted a lot- the music was a little overpowering at times.
Kudos for shooting in an actual restaurant. Thats hard to pull off.
Many of the cuts didnt flow that well. It seemed like some shots were just thrown in there at random.
Overall, excellent idea and very fun to watch, however, the ending was a bit of a let down.
"Bright Side of The Force"
by Piggs Productions
Genre: Any
| Group | Votes |
|---|---|
| Piggs Productions | 28 |
| Two Guys and a Camera Films | 18 |
| Douglas Scott Films | 8 |
| Hayashi ninja | 3 |
| Jesse Gilbert Films | 2 |
Bright Side of The Forc
by Piggs Productions
Lightsabers have a whole new purpose...
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