The Expendables
Genre: AnyRules: You know that AMAZING ACTION movie coming out? Called "The Expendables"? We want your take on the TITLE of the movie; what else or who else is expendable? No action allowed.
Come on guys, this one is not your best efforts. The sound is bad, I can barely make out what's going on. Turn off the fans please!!! You know you can do much better.
Interesting entry for an animation short. But it felt like the actions of picking up stuff by the main character went on a little too long. I didn't get the fact that he shot the fly with the gun until I read the other reviews.
This one gets my vote for the week. Lucky for you to get to film in an actual restaurant, so you basically had to take what you could get lighting-wise. But the camera effects and sounds of the monster out of the box chasing the guys was great, very good job. Also liked how you only had to replace the lid to return the monster back. Only suggestions I would have would be to work on your lighting some more in the areas that you can control it, like at the house. Overall good job and you get my vote for this week.
I know you guys probably don't think that you're being directly racist with this short, but you are. I can't really give you any comments that will help because this one just doesn't work for me, sorry.
The beginning was very good with the banana creature in the closet, but the scenes with the old man ranting and raving just went on too long. It was pretty obvious you were cracking yourselves up with the old man character. Sometimes less is more. And the wind noise!!! Invest in a microphone sock. Overall though a decent job and keep on filmfightin', look forward to more entries.
Your credits are hard to read. Overall though this is a decent entry, you managed to film in some interesting locations and worked on a story to go along with everything. However, I'm still not really sure I understand elements of the story, I guess the bad guy is ourselves is the message here? You have to let us know. One of the better entries this week. Keep on filmfighting.
"Predatory Partner"
by Random Axe Entertainment
Genre: Any
| Group | Votes |
|---|---|
| Random Axe Entertainment | 29 |
| Dreamatic Productions | 27 |
| EvilGenius | 21 |
| Dark White films | 20 |
| Pier 7b Productions | 17 |
| Sprankle Studios | 13 |
Predatory Partner
by Random Axe Entertainment
When a young man won't sell his shares to his partner, she finds another way to get it.
2,190 views16 reviews29 votes
"Woo Hoo! Thank you to all of you who voted for our film. We are really excited as well as surprised by the win. With all the obstacles we faced in this fight we feared it wouldn't be as greatly acceptedd as it turned out to be.
We are very happy that we were able to fight our way up, with your help, from Middleweights to this. We are looking forward to the coming fights and hope we can continue producing quality films for your entertainment. Thanks for the compitition and we hope you all keep bringing it.
Special Thank You's: Audra - for helping on such short notice. Everyone who said we needed to be bumped up a weight class. Jake- For overseeing the whole operation in Justin's absence.
"That's a Wrap".
Random Axe Entertainment "