Valentine's Day Haiku
Genre: Video HaikuRules: Create a Valentine's Day themed VIDEO HAIKU! A video haiku is a 3 shot film. 1st shot is 5 sec, next shot is 7 sec, final shot is 5 seconds. SEE EXAMPLES HERE: http://bit.ly/s34Fmc
Wow! Cool thanks guys, it seems to be better than we expected. I wish this was still part of the PAF with KJl, but it was kind of out of KJL's movie genre type. But yeah I kind of fiddled with this pre-eddited thing and added music, but nothing too drastic. I like it too, i'm glad we made it short though, or else it would drag on with out a narrative. Orignally this was suppose to have a narrative. THANKS!
This really didnt do much for me. Technicaly, your cuts were dragged on a bit too much, which made the film longer I think. If you cut down some walking scenes and a bit on the intro scene, then perhaps you could have cut down 3 minutes of your film to make the time limit. Another thing was you dialogue and plot. Now this is suppose to be an action/ comedy thing and mystery. I didnt really get much out of any of those genres. Normaly actions are okay with little quirks for comic releif, but with this, it made it more confusing on what the whole film was about. Plot also, the plot lagged, this would have been great if there would have been a really begining middle of end. For film fights, you have to smush it all together to meet the time limit, I know. But try to think more about a constraint time limit when making up an idea or writing your script.
The camera quality rocked though.
Woah this is all like a strange sci-fi. The plotting is a little hard to follow at first, but later when he describes his condition it becomes more clear. It's a really interesting concept, personally I loved this film. You guys could make a full lengthed film based on just this short film. I really loved it.
That split screen must have been hard to do, I assume that you used only one camera. I, like you, need a boom mic, desperately. Wow nice FX! That was pretty crazy bullet action! Wow crazy ending! I liked it a lot, it was so crazy. There can be only ONE!
Lol this was really funny. It had me laughing out loud. The narration is really hilarious! Awesome job man!
HOLAY FUCK A GHOST! This was a really cute film, I liked it a lot. Nice choice of music too. Nice job guys!
"Bright Side of The Force"
by Piggs Productions
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