Jeremy
"Bully Training" by thegroup - Reviewed on September 4th, 2006

hi. matt. are you sad? you look so blue. OHHHHH...thats just the white balance. the white font is really hard to ready. add a shadow or outline and it should be better. damn, that wind is overbearing. watch your audio cuts. if you have a lot of background noise (or wind and maybe cars in this case) you really have to blend that shit. the guy totally fucked his line up w2hen he was talking about the taser thingy. it goes completely silent when matt is looking down at the bully...and thnen back to wind and bugs sounds.

re -watching with nicer things to say:

haha.... hes getting paid to talk about it. OUCH! kick to the groin. haha. he farts int he bag. he should have stole that video camera sitting on the road by them. aka. sexilicious :) bully and bullee. silly. good job for matt, finally getting the bully back.


main things to remember here:
set your white balance, blend your sounds, and if your actors fuck up thier lines, make them re-do it.

not a bad submission at all. story was pretty good, just some distracting technical issues. write another good story and clean up the technical side, next time and you will blow our minds.

Jeremy
"Training Your Bully" by One Trick Pony - Reviewed on September 4th, 2006

hey, slow motion man. where is your film fight intro?! not sure im feeling some of these quick cuts in your exlpanation of what happened. the rambling was good. alright, a montage. loved the phone shot, for some reason. could have lit marissa, tho. damn, that crap trainer is bad ass. nice pink toilet seat. haha. peiced together really well. you shot this in 30 minutes? gawd, i hate you. would have been at least a couple hours for me. really nice take on the title. loved the end shot, too.


i just watched it for the like 5th time, and i laugh EVERY TIME i hear the "mommy mommy mommy!" - that is great.

Jeremy
"How To Train Your Bully" by Newmanmedia - Reviewed on September 9th, 2006

pretty funny. looks like you put a lot of work into this. you should have cut it down, tho. started losing steam after a few minutes. good job working wiht the locations you had available. especially the discoteque. i think your audio got fucked up during the rendering process. liked the acting a lot. some of the lighting was weird. overall pretty good, just a little too long. could be my attentions span, right now, too.