Justin
"Hero Genuine Draft" by The Ruse - Reviewed on September 4th, 2006

I wish this wasn't such a big QT file. Damn you quicktime and your craziness.

"You shut up" - what a sassy kid.

Nice panning shot. I'm not sure what I think of the music. It's kind of elevator-musicy. Could probably work better without any music, since the audio quality is so good. Or else just at the dramatic parts.

Did you film all these TV segments? Must have been fun.

First section could probably move along a little quicker. Seems like the editing is minimal. Not like that's bad, but it feels like it could be shorter.

Nice shot of the glass. Looks delicious!

Hehe, the scary sound when he pulled it back was nice.

I would suggest mucking around with the color a little more when they get crunk. Just the echo isn't really enough to show they're messed up.

I like the stunt dudes. Very nice.

Justin
"Bully Training" by thegroup - Reviewed on September 4th, 2006

You gotta watch those titles. Place them higher up and closer to the center. Right on the edge like that, they're hard to see.

Damn the wind, right? Wind is an editor's worst nightmare. If you camera has a built in windscreen, turn it on, it cuts out all that bass. Otherwise just redub the audio. For shots that are really far away it's super easy since you can't really see their mouths.

I don't understand why there's a line above the names.

The color is really blue and dark looking. Check out some color correction when you're editing to brighten things up.

Main actor has a good voice. It kind of reminds me of Jake from On Rye.

I'd also suggest using a different font. Something thicker that will stay quality looking when compressed.

It's good to see a new group submit! Keep on doing it and you'll keep getting better, just listen to us wise old men.