Awesome costume! You guys are still having some issues with the video footage 'jittering.' Not sure what that is all about. An encoding glitch. Great posterframe, btw!!!

You bump the camera a bit on that last shot, after "doing my job!" LOVE the stunt dummy at the end, haha. A really great touch.

Audio could have been better on Grammar Man. Also, I don't think he's pronouncing anything wrong, he's using the wrong word, since fall and fell as spelled differently.

Solid entry, love seeing the evolution of Emmerek each week!

This is HW material!

Excellent guys! Love the realistic action. Working logic and emotional effect. Not bad.

This one was very well done! The acting was pretty good and the editing was nice, but what really blew me away was the use of Stunt Dummy at the end. I didn't notice the living actor wasn't even there until he hit the ground!

Great job!

very nice done

Good short story. Boring to watch, predictable, don't agree with it making HW at all.

I liked the dummy you threw off the roof. Nice costume, especially the underwear. Reminds me of Quail Man from Doug, which you're probably too young to remember.

It was Ok. I liked it

It is OK, especially since you are kids. I guess I don't really understand why this is a HW though, since A) grammar isn't a power, unless editors and English teachers are now considered to have powers, and B) what you are correcting isn't the grammar of the sentence the kid on the roof said, you were correcting his pronunciation.

Decent job though.

This was entertaining! I would have liked to have heard at least one or two more grammar corrections before he fell tho. Great comic timing with the ending fall, I wasn't expecting that. :)

Awesome work on the costume. I also can not stress enough how much I appreciate comedy involving a dummy. Really nice work on your poster frame too. Those never get any props.

Pretty nice entry. WTG HW FTW!!! Rough audio cut with the first shot of Grammar Man. GM's audio was a little low, too. I really liked when the dude fell off the roof.

The guy playing Grammar Man could be in a nickelodeon show or something. I love the falling off the roof bit and that he thanks GM for helping... Great stuff.

Sometimes things come together perfectly and I think this is one. Great thumbnail, dummy, costume, and timing. Not sure why but the way GM corrected that sentence was AMAZING! I'd download this and save it for later if I could. Keep it up!