You could have cut a lot out. I did not see a whole Revenge of the Sith parody coming. You had a lot of cuts and none of them really had a easy transition



As always, your love Kevin Mosley

i wanted to stop watching at the VERY beginging. but for some reason, i kept watching. theres so many problems i dont know where to start. but since it\'s christmas, you\'re forgiven. love, jake.

I am feelin it! Cool movie! makes me wanna open presents!

Work on it.
(And please try not to use Marlyn Manson for any action sequences.)


I wonder what that roof guy in the backround was thinking of when he saw you two fighting in the front yard.

haha...this made me giggle. there was some really funny plot elements. i laghed at the ghad part. :) you definately vcould have cut it down, time wise and use some audio transitions. i like david as an actror. he has a really good screen presence.

This felt like a bad home movie. What was up with the insane jump cuts? And nothing ruins trying to be funny like your actors laughing while they\'re delivering their lines. You can do better.

Wouldn\'t a lightsaber cut through a broom?

Nice basketball court, I wish I had a court like that around here so I could throw down some hoops. Alas, we only have a tennis court.

Is that dude supposed to be a ninja? Oh, I see, he\'s a terrorist ninja - fair enough!

I kind of like the weird reality-ish style with little music at the start.

Hard to hear the dialogue in the middle with the music. Needs some sound effects in the choke sequence so we understand more what\'s happening.

Lots of weird, cheap-seeming cuts on the same shot. Irritating.

Needs more sound effects! The editing is slow-paced and a bit sloppy. Tighten this up, music this up, sound effects this up and it could have been an okay entry!