Oh boy, that's some exciting intro music!! What is that crazy texting program you're using? Looks fun, with everything all popping up like that. Music is pretty fun and intense. Glad you got an adult to play the dad! Not sure what he says though. The audio is too high for the dialogue. Hard to tell what's going on. Camera shaking it a bit too much - try a tripod or holding it steadier.

I like the shot at 1:08 a lot! I can imagine that with a jib looking quite nice!

Walking shot following that is good. I see some good shots here, but really it's just taking up too much time, we don't need all these shots to setup the story. Oh man! The car hit is so crazy. You think the dad would be freaking out more!!! That's sad!!!! Jeez, this took a turn for the dark side. I like the music at the end as well. Acting from the kid is good. I'm putting this as a MW, but see a lot of potential here!

I give this film a B rating.

A good set up, tragic. Good writiing and acting with the father/ son relationship. I would have ditched the wig "father" wore to be the doctor and would have disguised him with a surgical mask instead. The wig was comedic and distracting.

Music what what what? SO LOUD SO CRAZY. SO MUCH MUSIC...so loud that I can't hear what's happening in the piece...some alright shots...so loud though....can't hear dialogue...odd choice...I like the pan down of the dad getting into the car. Is this loud music what the kid's listening to? ...Really odd music after the car hit...no blood? Is the doctor the dad actor in a wig? Nice photoslideshow, like memories, right?, I still can't get over this music, what is it doing?

Hello!

Pretty good video! The acting was pretty good and some of the shots looked all right. But the music didn't match most of the video in the beginning and I couldn't hear the parents talking.

Great little video though!

Wow. I liked how this was put together the only critique I have would have been to tone down the music during the parents quick chat and picked it up againg when you see the boys again- so I could hear what was said. I like the pics of the father thinking about his son and the bluriness of the dr. and he comes to.