I liked the camerawork - extended shots always make me happy but you could have extended them even more, imo. Slight continuity issues in between shots, nothing all that drastic. Sorta predictable ending, coulda countered that with an over-the-top character. Pretty good!

reason for continuity problems--It was my first submission, so i wanted to get it right at 1 minute.

WHOA, DUDE!!! who pruned that tree? it is amazing. i liked how you followed the guy around the back of the truck, that was a cool choice. lighting coulda been better there, but no big deal. the joke was pretty good, too...i liked how your mom was just one of your friends dressed up. that was silly. why did you pick that font? it didnt fit the theme and was hard to read. anyways, other than that, i enjoyed it.

The title lasted for like 1/4 second. I assume it said please silence your cellphone. The font you used with it and the end credits is really hard to read. Wow the lighting is bad when he comes in. This one wasn\'t very funny. I was excpecting him to reply with something rediculous as kind of a punchline.

Good panning use of the camera going around the car, pretty smooth. Although there were some darkness issues in the middle, I know that\'s what you were going for, but there needs to be some light to see more what\'s going on, even if it\'s dim light.

The walk around shot was very nice in this film. Clever idea. Man that would fucking suck if that would happen to me. I would have gotten the belt or the hotcoals maybe even! This was very well done, a bit short. I still think that the ideas this filmfight could have been a bit more crazy and creative. But very nice.

This is my first time watching this one. So this review is probably gonna\' be a bit more critical. Cool one shot. I always like those. Your camera looks really nice. Especially on those lights. I like the lighting of this movie. I\'m not gonna\' lie. All setup.. and then end was really lacking. I would\'ve liked to\'ve seen something more extreme. It was just kind of.. there. Anyway, good work. In production, HW definitly. In story, LW definitly.

That was pretty good. I liked it ;) begining shot was pretty shaky but i liked it. Good setup. I thought overall this was very well executed and stayed within the time limit!

Other than that NICE KID WITH A SWEET CAR LIKE THAT!