I'm not sure what you were trying to do here. There is a lot of royality free music out there you can use.

this left me with a fuzzy feeling inside.

Didn't quite get this one. Maybe had the music been softer i could have heard what he was saying. Or was it loud intentionally. What were you going for here?

A bit confusing, I think the Pen is supposed to be the Predator and the Paper is the Prey...I don't know. Keep the viewer in mind for future projects. Confusion can be a useful tool in telling the story, so long as it all comes together in the end. Keep it up!

this ones a pretty lost cause. don't use fades. and don't film videos with no plot.

Hmm. Sorry mate, this one fell short with me. It didn't seem to really have a plot of any kind. I'm thinking it had to do with the pen and paper as predator and prey? Also, really really watch a lot of movies, more than once. Start to break down the shots and try and figure out how they came out the way they did. Pay attention to editing too, a couple shots here were way too long, like him putting the pen in his pants. Keep it up though mate, you made something and that's the first step. Keep filming!