Hah, the opening yawn reminds me of our sometimes funny POV entry. Sounds like the sound effects are way too loud and only coming out of one channel. Dog sounds like he's got some kind of crazy hooves on or something, ha. Little over the top. I imagine dogs feet are pretty quiet. The walking it getting a bit over the top.

Whoa, you have chickens and stuff??? That's awesome. I wish I had chickens. This is going on way too long. Doesn't have to be a full 3:30 ... could fit this story until 1:30. Dragged out too long for me.

I give this film a C- rating.

This started out great, but the outside walk was just too long. Foley is so hard sometimes. Actually recording some fists in grass might have worked better. Still, we both thought " Dog Picture!" Arf Arf!

I liked the blinking effect. You have a good idea. Could probably be a little shorter, and the sound FX need some improvement. Play around with ways of creating sounds, until it sounds good to you. Good job though, was this all done in one take?