Very gothy looking clown people here! Not sure what I think about that. I like the close up of the boots. The subtitles are a bit awkward in this, since theyre a non-standard fonts.
Fight scene is slow and awkward - shoot around that - shoot close ups, speed up shots, slow other ones down, you can make it intense with some trickery!
WIND sound! Gotta fix up the wind sound. Why keep it? Really is distracting, especially when it's cutting back and forth. Wind is nasty, I know, but you just gotta edit around it.
Ew, gross face stitching effect at the end. I like that. Well done. Slow motion spit is very gross, is that supposed to be the other one dying I guess?
Thought this was OK but the fight scenes were just too slow paced for MW this fight - thanks for the submission, love the makeup, costumes, and accents!
Thanks for the feedback. We'll definitely be submitting to future film fights, and we'll take into account everything you've said.
Some interesting camera effects I liked in here like the girl going from the road to the hill. A lot of effort on this one....costumes, props, special effects.
This had a bit of a "Highlander" feel to it, which was cool. The fade in and out from black was used a little too much. I think the fight scenes could have been better, if you had another person to hold the camera and move in and around the action. I liked this one, keep it up.
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