Nice, quick intro. Ahhaha nice dance! Hows the kids, nice. I had to listen to \"Can\'t ask for more\" three times before I could convince myself she wasn\'t speaking spanish. Nice and tight, good job!

This one was interesting, and the dance over to the cell phone is funny. It\'s just kind of hard to believe that someone\'s sister would completely ignore her choking brother to talk on the cell phone is all. Good editing overall but could have used some different shot perspectives to liven things up a little.

Opening graphics were sweet. Acting was pretty solid. You kept it short, which rocks. Good shot variation once the intensity picked up. Good plain dialogie, except I think the \"How are the kids?\" line was shitty. It made me groan a bit. And when Sandy dipped out of the shot to the left I couldn\'t understand why you left that in while editing. It killed that shot and made you remember that you\'re watching kids making a movie.

I want to see more. This was still good. The shot with the Cellphone in the Foreground was beautiful. Yeah, I said it... BEAUTIFUL.

The sound is really low. I like the shot with him choking and the cellphone in the foreground. Very nice. When she\'s talking one the phone she moves out of frame. I think you definitely should have panned over to keep her in frame. This one was pretty funny! I like the blatant disregard for the choking guy.

Bad acting, bad lighting, bad composition, bad dialogue. Nice presentation, the small file made the wmv play it hugE! Camera was a pro camera. Bad writing. Nice attempt. Not terrible but if you\'re going to make movies put more thought and effort into it, after all, you\'re not getting paid to do this so do us botha favor and make it more watchable. DOn\'t use cliche\'s on the phone, the piece wasn\'t really about anything. And if he was really choking, and this would add to the comedy, he should gasp and hold his throat, then go and grab her and be pulling at her sweater and maybe take her top off. I don\'t know. But one key to acting is motivation and there was none here on either character\'s parts.

haha...funny stuff. i liked the angles you chose alot. the ending felt a little abrupt. it would have been better to end on the choking guy, imo. other than that,. i dug it. oops, i forgot SOUND. it was too quiet in the begining. good shit.

cool, nothing too special, but cool. girls are the WORST with cell phones man, the worst.

Just Jive - Acting Reviews

I really liked this movie. I hope in real life that girl answers her phone like that, that made me laugh out loud. Overall the acting was pretty good. The lines at the begining were hard to hear. And when she was on the phone, she did a real good job of not careing that they guy was chokeing. But, i think it could of had a more abrupt ending, it just kind of faded away. You could of had him laying down dead on the couch or somthing. A fade away ending never does it for me. I give it a thumbs up

Dustin

Haha funny idea! I really liked the cute jig that the chick does. Overall it was great!

This is like the third time i\'ve watched this. One of my favorite entries this week. I hate to say it. But, I think I want to marry your sister. She looks like a more grown up Tina from 22films. (I\'m sure you have no idea who that is. This is shot really well. I crack up every single time the girl starts dancing. This was a great video with good acting. I can\'t wait to see a longer film from you guys.

Jellybeans. HA!

OK, choking sound effects/acting = A+... girl wandering out of shot while on the phone = D+

I liked the shot with the cell phone in the foreground.. which pretty much led to it ringing. Other than that SO UNDREALISITIC!!! But that is what you were going for. good cuts/pacing, also.

the begining sound effect needs to be turned down a bit... it\'s so much louder than the rest of your levels. Good job, overall.