the narration is pretty low, and hard to make out. turn that up next time. but i love the mythical story line, and the concept. and the pay off of the spaghetti mouth is great. good job.

I didn't realize the spaghetti in the mouth until I read the comment, and the Narration was hard to understand in certain parts. It kind of dragged on, but you got the message across.

Really cool concept. I felt like the voice over was a little soft and could have used a bit more volume. Writing was really well done and creative. Keep up the good work.

i didn't get this at all. your talking about Greek statues. and some of your shots where shaky and to close to you.

Its a good story but somtimes I dindnt know what you say

Interesting script. It could have been a bit louder. The words were very good.

A little hard to hear, but I thought this had a good script and idea. It reminds me a little bit of a Doctor Who episode called Blink.

Hey Mate. Definitely grab yourself an external mic, or at least do some post editing on the audio. Other than that, this flick was great. The mythology to the monologue was great. I love the shots of all the statues, and the spaghetti thing was great. I would have loved to see the statue be in a different position when it was behind your character and then back to normal when he turns back. Great fist submission mate!

I was kinda expecting the cat statue to be gone when he gets up. oh well...

Everyone who says that the statue should have moved...I think was wrong. This was perfect because, If it moved that would be completely expected. It actually made me think, what if the statues move when I don't look and then go back to their original position when I look back. Kinda like the idea of Toystory. (They move when you don't look) I LIKED IT :]

Hard to hear over the sound effects. Didn't get the total idea you were going for because of it.

I didn't get what was the plot of this movie. It had something to do with that cat statue right? Better audio would been made this movie better.
6/10