Audio is a little bit shaky on this - the zooming out as they walk is awkward. I like the dialogue, seems natural. You gotta watch out your audio levels jumping all over the place when you're shooting from far away. All the zooming is distracting. I like the big dude's hair.

Ha, the revenge title is kind of funny, but I don't really like that font - it's too thin for a REVENGE title. Should be a big bold intense revengy font.

The sideways shot with the gunshot is pretty brutal and effective. I like the splattery falling effect and the little bullet holes when he's shot on the ground. Disturbing and gross.

Why not stay consistent and use the same font for "the end" as you used for "REVENGE!" ?

Pretty effed up! I didn't think the concept was that strong, the zooming was odd. Zooming like that works if you're using a camera that has a fast manual zooming option, not one that's a low automatic zoom like I assume you're using. Not a bad entry, but not a HW this week - hope some of this advice helps, thanks dudes!

What a twisted friend! While I think we over use guns in the fights, this sequence was very realistic, especially the secondary shots, reaction and effects. Sam Peckinpah would be proud.

What just happened haha that was sweet.

awkward acting, bad writing, good shots, good kill scene.

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Great job on the video! I loved the kill scene, the sound and visual effects were timed great and the music was a great choice. Some of the dialogue from the guy who died was a little choppy and some of the cuts were a bit long, but overall pretty good!

I liked the music. lol. The dialogue was really natural sounding, but the different zooms was a bit distracting

So I liked the 2nd half better than the 1st. I liked how you used black and white and the score at the end when he gets the pepsi. I didn't care for it ending in gunfire I think something could have been more cleverly done to get revenge and the cussing was a bit extreme. I always find a movie better if done with out profanity unless the situation actually calls for it.