Okay, so this song sounds like it's copyright. You should avoid copyright music! I like this opening shot with the dudes talking, but the 2nd shot cuts in awkwardly. Shouldn't their conversation continue? Cuts need a lot of work on this. Looks like you're using a decent DSLR.

Careful to not film at sunset, you'll lose all your light! Those last couple shots are super dark.

Hrmph yeah, this isn't so much a film as the start of a film. Who is this guy? Why is he mute? Why are his friends to mean to him??

Video quality is good on this, audio quality is pretty good - total lack of story and editing needs a lot of work so things flow smoothly from one thing to another. Sorry guys, but you're doing so many things right here!! Just work on your story telling and I sense HW in your futures :)

Copyrighted music. It really hurt this piece. Loved the bullies...they could have been a bit meaner, but had that pack mentality. Nice ad-libs.