AUGH, your mic audio is only coming from the left channel. This is like a MEGA pet peeve of mine. Edit with headphones! Pay attention to your audio. Or at least make it mono if it's a mono mic. The flash back has audio that is centered.

Hah, the shot with the giant wind instrument is funny. This montage of silly things could be shorter. Only show the funniest parts. Really have to establish a 'flow' with these kind of montages to make them work. This one was a little awkward.

Haha. I like the "leotard" line - that's funny.

Okay now the audio in the car is centered. I like the outfit of the mute guy. Good look. Pretty cool. Do you guys live in Florida? Looks like one of those torrential Florida afternoon rains that happen all the time (I lived in Orlando).

Editing needed to be tightened up on this, didn't see much of a story. Liked a couple of the lines in this though. I like the concept too, that he can't talk cuz of a jinx.

Man....had he not spoke! Ooops! Great sfx to tell what he did and get around the obvious problem there!

That was weird. And funny! But he spoke :(

Funny! Loved the annoying the other person- would have liked to see some different angles and a close up even during the part where he hits the guy. Loved the revenge part of it. Sound fluctuated quite a bit and you kind of took the total mute out but still a great story.

You missed lighting. Just some light on them sitting on the couch would attract focus. I wasn't really paying much attention because I couldn't see the actor's faces.
BUT nice idea and costumes.

We really loved it, though u do have some things to work on, it was a great film with some great ideas. "That is Fresh!"