Hey, it's XBOX Live! I love me some xbox live. Haha. I can't hear this other guy talking. I like your interpreation of the theme. YAH! POP TARTS!!! Oh no, look what you've done! I like the tape on the mouth stuff people are doing. Good visual, as I said before.

I like the lighting in the mirror scene. Good colors. Oh snap that 911 call ain't going to work! I wish the person on the other end of the phone sounded more like they were actually on a phone. Would help us feel distant from our character.

Why keep the awful wind noise? MUTE it or something :)

Don't really understand the rake guy sequence. Man it's like no one can talk in this world, wtf. I like how the (copyright sounding).

HAHAH LOL AT THE SCREEN NAME!! Doesn't really make sense in the movie but hell if I don't like self-referentialness.

Overall this was OK, could have been a bit shorter (you can always go shorter if you want, doesn't have to be 3:30 exact).

Great music! I think it would have been stronger to cut the going to person to person near the end, esp. when it's the same guy. You used costume to help, but I was on to that right away. Nice concept.

the lighting was great in every shot except the first one :). I didn't really get the ending. the music was wonderful.

I don't get it. But still nice music and shots.

Interesting idea I must say. Very well executed. Loved how he was able to mute her and the tribute to Toy Story and FilmFights. Hope to see you again in another fight. A critique? Try to get a tighter close up in some shots, and her crossing the bum could have been a bit quicker. Def thumbs up!