Boy this is some seriously 80s sounding (probably copyright, tisk tisk) music. Your lighting is a bit harsh here - try to diffuse your lights when you can. Oh my, mysterious suprise! It's like that movie -- the spanish one, with the time travelling. Audio at the end is way too low, boost that! Can barely hear it!! BOOST! Fade cuts are kind of weird. End seems like it has a bit too much happening - better if it was abrupt - not even a shot of the guy laying dead at the end? Should set up again that this dude just killed the other dude.

Story seems kind of gimmicky on this, audio needed a lot of work. I think this is an OKAY film but not quite okay enough for MWs this week. Work on some of your technical stuff and coming up with a better story next time.

Copyright music hurt you. It's obvious that's a closet! Still a unique concept and playing both roles worked! He'd raise some cain, if he were able...yuk, yuk, yuk.

The lighting on your first shot doesn't match the rest of the video. For me the music didn't go well with the video. I think some suspensful music and/or sound FX would have fit better. Keep submitting!