Fun opening music, Asher! You should never ever shoot with the camera facing in that direction - should always be sideways, in wide screen! It's really distracting me, unless you cut out of it or something. Big thing to watch out for! I like the tracking shot at 1:08 --- indy mogul snorricam perhaps ??

Ha - the kid in the dark shirt is a pretty decent actor. Oh man and your video is even different sizes when you switch back and forth -- shoot sideways next time :)

Yay, finally sideways :) Well, I like that you found this hospital location, we don't need to see it for that long before we hear any kind of sound effects.

This guy doesn't look like a doctor at all, haha --- maybe try to find just like a white shirt?

So, next time film sideways - I have an iphone 4 as well - you need to make sure to hold it really steady so it's not all shaky. It'll help your footage look much better. Thanks for submitting! Take these tips to heart and try again!

No doubt we'll see more phone movies in the future. The do allow for unusal angles and camera moves by virtue of their size and weight. They are also good for getting that covert footage such as hospital interiors, right? heh heh.

So...now the football coach is going to operate? Yikes!
I found the narrow frames unique, but it was almost as if watching this through a keyhole. A pioneer!

I like the story line. I thought you had a sidways snoricam until I saw your arm in the mirror. (If you don't know what a snoricam is, it is a device that mounts the camera to your actors body). The actors were good, and I like that you were able to get some footage in a real hospital setting.

Looks like there's a formatting issue with the iPhone4...thingy! Fix that if possible. Good job, and see you guys next time.