Hey it's Bubbaju! I like the shot of the dude peering into the house - the music is good too. I'd love to hear the crunching of his footsteps too to make it extra suspenseful. Good shot of his hand up against the door --- CREEPY.

Everyone loves them some video games, that's for sure. Not sure I like the vingetting around the lens, it's a bit distracting. That's always better if it's a MILD effect. Suppose you're trying to really show this as a different sort of thing so --- in that case, I might be okay with it :)

I like that the magical feather appears in there again.

Creepy voice over! I would suggest also putting some vocal effects on it. This mirror scene is a cool idea. AWWW, THE DOG HAS PAJAMAS!!!! That's funny but kind of takes me out of the moment of the film.

Careful with those whip its kid! Ha, wow, this kid is really messed up. I like that you brought it back to the bedroom.

So, some kind of magical pillow .... he's tripping out ... trying to figure out exactly what's happening here. I like the idea. I think you could have done a lot more with creative and colored lighting. Buy some colroed light bulbs and add some freaky reds and blues in there, really will make your shots look AWESOME! Thanks guys!

This is what I imagine being paranoid and on LSD would be like....and I mean that in a good way!

That was really creepy. Great job!

So I am creeped out by the hand in the closet handing him whatever it was- I was very focused on the hand! Interesting idea kind of disappointed by the talking in the end. The trying to talk and feather coming out was great.