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Manasewitsch, "Silent Justice"
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AvatarJustin
Reviewed on July 13th, 2010

Hey, it's copyright music :( --- hah, I like the flying footballs. Why are you using the vingnette effect? It's a bit intense. I know it's like saying "oh this is POV" - but I don't think it's needed. We can see his hands already.

Hah, dude breaking into the car is a nice little sequence. I like the car squealing sound effects. Nice touch of danger. Also good that you're redubbing all these lines instead of just using normal audio.

I wish when people were exploding into blood around him, we'd switch to his POV view and see some blood splatter on the phone or whatever. Maybe he stops, looks annoyed and brushes it off.

The sound effects are a bit loud on this. Some of the explosions made my speakers angry.

Wasn't so sure on this one initially, but I loved how crazy it got! Good work!

AvatarYellowtractor
Reviewed on July 14th, 2010

Unique concept. A silent lawyer. Obviously a "fantasy" piece! ha! Your use of high and low angle between judge and the lawyers was good but the set needed a bit more dressing. An older judge would have looked better I think.

Avatarcakebakejake
Reviewed on July 14th, 2010

some good comedic acting in this one. love the first minute of dialog. the clone jury is weird, but pretty funny, like most parts of this piece. the judge is funny. "well, the facts have changed." the thing about this entry is that it's supposed to be in a court room, but it's clearly a bedroom, and not much work went into concealing that. there's books and lamps and doors and posters. plan your shots better to conceal that... the ending with the darker hue would have looked better for the whole film as well. anyway that's the only major flaw (though a lot of people will find it hard to look past it), but other than that this is wacky and silly enough to be quite enjoyable. good job!

AvatarRedHandedRejects
Reviewed on July 14th, 2010

LOVED THIS! Hilarious. I actually don't care if I don't win as long as you do.

AvatarKrust217
Reviewed on July 14th, 2010

ha! some awkward parts as far a the acting (I realize that some of it was intended to be awkward) But the ending made me smile.

AvatarTheRecurringMainz
Reviewed on July 14th, 2010

Funny. But the camera wasn't still. And it was really confusing... Liked it though.

AvatarRazorDragon
Reviewed on July 14th, 2010

I really liked it!!!! You guys did a decent job setting up a court room in someones house haha. The acting of the girls in the jury could of been a bit better but the filming and closing statements were awesome! Good Job and Good Luck to you!

AvatarRandomAxe
Reviewed on July 15th, 2010

This was pretty funny. I absolutely loved the dancing closing statement. Wish more lawyers would do that. Some of the obvious stuff were the room it was shot in and the young woman judge playing old kinda took me out of it. Looked like you had fun with it though!

Avatarrebel181
Reviewed on July 16th, 2010

When Jimmy Smits gave that look at the end I laughed. But up until then it was a challenge to get through, the camera was all over the place zooming in and out. The clone jury was strange, the courtroom was done pretty well though u could definately see it was in a house, like a house arrest trial? But yeah MW i'd have thought. Good acting by the other lawyer though

Avatarrebel181
Reviewed on July 16th, 2010

When Jimmy Smits gave that look at the end I laughed. But up until then it was a challenge to get through, the camera was all over the place zooming in and out. The clone jury was strange, the courtroom was done pretty well though u could definately see it was in a house, like a house arrest trial? But yeah MW i'd have thought. Good acting by the other lawyer though

AvatarJeFilm94
Reviewed on July 20th, 2010

This was a really good film, I really liked it. Everything was good; the plot, the acting, camera angles and movement and zooming, and the editing.
I was overwhelmed by how well it all fit together (especially the music) :)

I just had to laugh when "the winner" was announced and the Top Gun theme started playing xD

Loved it =D

AvatarKaiprocom
Reviewed on July 21st, 2010

The clone jury was strange... The whole this was strange, it wasn't bad though.

AvatarFandomK
Reviewed on July 23rd, 2010

Liked the silent attorney's dancing arguement, funny.
Courtroom seemed more like people playing dress up in someones living room. Would have liked to see a better courtroom.
The shirt ripping was halarious!

Avatarjojjy
Reviewed on July 30th, 2010

that was so funny i cried. If i could have the strength of the panther, i'd be happy for a long time. ty-jojjy

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