\"genre: Art\" I absolutely agree as the three shots are great in that respect. Great production overall but the first two shots are a bit too random for my taste in the sense that they feel made only for asthetics not as an effective figuration of what\'s narrated. I also don\'t like seeing two \"characters\" since it makes the 3rd shot less effective with the narrated text. I like the fact that the video contains only the haiku and a website at the end, no credits; minimal approach.

First of all, wow, what are you shooting on? It looks great! I like the haiku a lot because it\'s so dramatic, and then the final punchline is so depressingly hilarious. The voice over is perfect - well done, but I don\'t understand why you had two different people in it. Why not just the one guy?

The music is the best part of this one. I’m just trying to figure out if when they say, “You have wasted life�; they mean I’ve wasted time watching their film. 2.5/5

This was okay. I actually found the ending funny, I\'m not sure if it was suppose to be. It was creative and well done, but I still didnt find it as appealing.

~Danielle

Heh, i just laughed at this. The first two shots are pretty neat, but that voice over is just hilarity. It detracted everything from this. I wish I had your camera.

Kind of a bleak message, didn’t quite understand why the characters changed from one person to another. Voiceover was an interesting change of pace.

Hmm, again, I have a hard time taking a serious video.. well, serious. It\'s a little bit much. Especially since it\'s done by a D.Hermit-er. It just feels.. weird to me.

Very nicely shot. I say that a lot, but yours looked very good. Perhaps a bit more work on the voice acting, other than that, solid.

Powerful message to the haiku, but the 3 scenes are pretty disjointed, and to me they don\'t really have any effect on the video. Mind you, what would you video for that sort of message....

I liked your voice over - makes me wish I would have gone for VO in mine instead of text. Great delivery too, especially on the last line. The music is spot-on as well, seems to follow your words. As for the exact shots themselves, seems odd that there\'s one dude in the first two and then another in the last. I would have rather seen a baby sitting in a field, then a man, then an old person in the final shot. But it\'s not bad how it is now.

Funny yet powerful. I really like the direction you\'ve taken Kyle. You\'ve come a long way. I don\'t really like the 2nd shot but overall I love the haiku and the video. I expect great things consistantly from you now, don\'t let me down.

Interesting. I didn\'t quite understand it. Using a track from Plans was a plus. It was a little more abstract than a lot of other entries.

Nobody goes there. NOBODY SAYS I HAVE WASTED LIFE. NOBODY. Cool berry shot.