Hey, it's Glmclain! Here's some constructive criticism for you guys!

* That music was very obnoxious and not mixed very well. It would blend better with the scene if it were playing from a speaker, instead of just laying it over the video.

* It wasn't cut in a trailer format, this is just a note rather than a full-blown critique.

*The camera was shaky and the cutting was jarring

*There was a lot of audio that needed to be cleaned up, wind blowing against the mic, the kids voices were hard to hear, etc.

*That high pitched noise that was playing was very irritating.

*Although the quality was very good, the shots themselves needed improvement.

Overall it was a good effort, and I'm glad you guys submitted! Hope to see you again!

Mmm, that opening music is loud. It's very hard to hear what people are saying, bad camera noise. Not sure what's happening here. Confusing. No idea what's happening and it's just very loud! Trailers should tease the concept more! More VO and text on screen!

SUMMARY: Didn't make sense. Needed more VO / explanations. Audio mix was bad. Copyright music.

From 0:57 onwards I liked it a lot. The blood splat on the window and even breaking window must have been tough effects. And you cut the clips pretty well--I don't get the rap though.