Thanks mate! Really glad you liked the story!

Thanks so much! I was incredibly stressed during the production about the lighting.. it's something I've never been great at. I was surprised and happy when I got it in the editor. Thanks again!

Wow! Thanks Justin for the awesome review! I'm glad to have pleased you so. Hah! The longer (by 30 secs) version of this tells a little more about the 4th dimension and time travel. That's why you see Mark dead in the beginning and when David comes back he's able to stop him. That's why the clock freezes and (if you can catch it) jolts back before the next shot.

I've also heard other people believe that Mark killed himself anyway, and David wasn't able to keep him safe forever and that's why he was on the roof in the end. Lol, I like this version too. I guess with it being this short there's nothing wrong with leaving it up to the audience.

Thanks again! My actors will be really glad to hear your review!

Great! Also, did you get an email notification saying I left a review? We're still working on that system and I'm not sure if it's still broken

Nope, not yet anyway. Is it the normal filmfights email? I don't check my spam too often.

Hey Mate! Thanks for the great critique! Glad you liked it. Michael was awesome. This was his first performance (outside of running and falling in Epidemic). It was a really cool experience on set because you could see with each take and each shot we did, he kept getting better. We shot in sequence which is why the end was the best.

It was a fun shoot. The music is Pro Scores from VideoCopilot, which I'll be switching to Neumannfilms.com's music when they finally put it out. They did the trailer music for our new "Epidemic" teaser on YouTube. As for the clips they're from a film titled "The Yesterday Machine," which is in the public domain. I don't remember the actual site I got it from though. Thanks again!

Happy to help :)

yah... all sniffling and i couldn't push out a f'ing tear! i could get myself to cry at home, but as soon as it was "action" time, my mind would just go blank and i couldn't get them to roll out...

good fun, though...

and the squeezing of the eyes was because i was stepping on a thumb tack to get me to cry, but... well, that didn't work... haha

Hah! I think it worked anyway mate. I've know people who cry like this actually. The don't shed a tear but they squint and wrinkle thier forehead because they get a headache from "crying." You did great!

That's funny! That's one of the shots I actually trimmed about half a second off just to get in under time! Glad you liked it! THanks!~

Thanks mate! Always good to have someone enjoy your work as a whole. And yes! You got it, he was able to go back somehow by jumping from the roof. My original script had a big explainer about wormholes and time travel, etc etc, but I figured I'd go subtle and see how many people figure it out. Well done! Also, I'm glad you like the music choice, I like the contrast of the music and the content, and it's plausable because that's what was playing on the tv in the beginning. Thanks!

Glad I got to see it...I'm shocked that I figured out how he went back in time...thanks for clarifying that for me...can't wait to see your next HW!

On one hand you used our idea, on the other hand, I'm sure you didn't do it intentionally or wrote the script before checking out our film, and aside from that, your execution was more technically advanced (both because of equipment and effort put into recording and post) and overall better. Your story was streamlined and well executed. Also, time jump = 5th dimension, not 4th (also Einstein's theory). The 4th dimension refers to time as a straight line, 5th refers to multi-dimensional time. Good job.

@team15 Sorry it seems like I used your idea. I haven't had the chance to watch any films other than the HWs yet. I'll get to it! Lol. Also, I never knew that about Einstein's theories. I just used these clips from "The Yesterday Machine." Thanks for watching mate!

@team15 Just watched yours again! I didn't realize that was your film for some reason. It's a good one, but really it didn't have much to do with ours... aside from going back just a few minutes. The reasons they went back weren't the same nor was the way they went back. Again, sorry if you thought they were too similar.

with the exception of the traveling back in time a couple minutes I don't see any connection...

Thanks so much! Yea, it's incredibly hard to light night scenes! I've always had trouble with lighting. Too much light makes it look lit and not enough light doesn't bring out enough detail. Anyway, really glad you liked the shots and acting. Thanks!

The opening shots of the film were really well done. I loved how you could feel how close the characters are/were just by watching the first minute. Like everyone else has said before me: excellent lighting, framing, and the music just brought it all together. Story was a bit confusing, but when you got you get it. Nice!

@Smooth Thanks mate! I'm really glad you liked it. It was really important to me for the audience to feel how close these guys were. Thanks again!

Thanks! I'm glad you mentioned the follow focus, I had to do that all manually on the actual focus ring. Thank god for 20/20 vision... Thanks for watching!