Classic urban legend! Unfortunately, I was hoping to see a little more on this. I like that you took the humorous route, but I feel it may have been better for another fight. The tampon was halarious! really unexpected. Overall good job! It kept my hooked from beginning to end!
Alan
Short and sweet which isn't a bad thing. I enjoyed the set up and the view through the mirror was a nice touch, albeit a little awkward. I think it might have something to do with how off center everything is, but it's only a minor detail.
The acting wasn't bad and I actually enjoyed the friendly nature between the two guys.
Now, of course, I come to that moment in which the film drops the ball. Personally I liked the gross yet comical twist at the end with what I can only describe as a bloody tampon. And while that can certainly be a horrific sight, I think it's also why the film missed the mark. I know it's not actually in the Fight description, but I think these were all supposed to be scary and still pertain specifically to the original urban legend the story represents. Had you stuck to the original premise of the legend you may very well have made one of the best movies. C+
We were trying to stick to the "short and sweet" idea. 3:30 is great and all but I feel like most people waste a lot of time and drag their quality down. I obviously went the comedy route despite the fight being a horror genre and I imagine that's why we suffered the lame Middleweight section. We went gory at least on the tampon. Still could be place in the horror genre, just more of a Troma style...kind of. I think it makes people uncomfortable. Men anyway. And uncomfortably is the route of horror. ;-) Thanks for the review!
Haha man I must've been tired. Noticing all the spelling errors. "...could be placed* in the horror genre." Discomfort*
I think this was great. The shots looked good. The sound was a bit bathroomy. Both actors were very believable. Had a great laugh ending. I'm excited to see what else you come up with. Thanks Outlaw!
Thank you for the praise! I'm glad you enjoyed and I look forward to submitting more in the future.
I like you two as actors, as a buddy-buddy team. Man, all those funny games you'd play as kids. Ha, wow, that's quite the twist ending there. Maybe if after that last shot, a girl came in and was like "GUYS GEEZ GROW UP!!!!" or something like that. Anyway, thanks for whipping something up! Would love to see what other sorts of trouble you'd get into!
Glad you enjoyed. It seems like people are digging our dynamic on screen as actors. I'll have to take that and run with it some more. It seems like the M. Night Shamadinger twist is a hit!
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