Cute, cute.... You know Mushy, your video had bad milk in it, and Jared\'s cellphone vid also had bad milk in it. Do I see a bad milk \'fad\' coming on??? Bottoms up! ;)

The first wide shot got really old. Try not to move the camera and use another wide shot, vary it up and plug in some medium ones and close ups (especially for those tense dramatic moments!).

The second scene is very inconsistently lighted. The girl is lit well and nicely sillhouetted, but the guy looks like the gamma level was turned way up just so we could see him.

The sound is really bad. Don\'t be afraid to dub the voices over if you\'re getting that much of a hiss. Or throw on some audio filters in and try to get rid of it.

The last wide shot lasted way too long, too.

Overall the story was okay, the actress seemed like she didn\'t want to be in the movie, but just to get it over with, which made the tone of the movie seem boring.

The sound was pretty aweful for some reason.
Acting was good, i\'d say. It was a sketchy plot though, I couldnt get too much into the story and plot line.
I\'d say this could be much better.

Okay- I can see why this is a LW compared to others- but I\'m still glad you made it. I laughed. But it was far too silly to be a HW contender. Clever cheese non the less.

A lightweight entry with some funny segments, but the actress spent a little too much time looking directly into the camera. And it was hard to tell what was happening during the \"gunshot\" scene. But I totally cracked up at the milk and \"now die\" line. Keep up the humor; looking forward to more entries from your group.