I love the crane shots, but the audio sounds weird.
Love the beginning sequence montage it was very nice, I agree that the audio is sort of unpleasant, a more minimalist quite tone would have seemed more authentic/depressing and tone fitting.
Location and the main character's desire get me involved, but the gunfight solution is a bit clumsy.
Nice ending. The fight could've been better, but still a very good movie. I liked how the voice sounded almost delirious. Please do a tutorial on how to do that. I'm so clueless. I loved this!
Really liked the title sequence (reminded me of Dexter) and the crane shots made it look very professional. Was a bit confusing at the end in terms of motive but great none the less.
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