Nice song! Kudos for making one up. Wow... there are so many things about this movie that are bad. But it was actually fun to watch. It was so random and pointless. But fun, nonetheless. However, I couldn\'t force myself to watch the entire thing. It got really boring near the halfway point.

you got me laughing in the beginning but then it just kinda went in many directions. craziest submission by far however i didn\'t get the soap opera vibe from this one.

Haha the intro is great. Of course it didnt make sense at all, but that\'s how a lost of soaps are. This was a very amature film but pretty good, but not yet worthy of being a heavy weight. I got some laughs here and there. Audio got a little too quite sometimes, but this happens. The cuts lag a bit, just too much excess before or afterwards so it seems slower. You could try to over lap audio to make it flow better.

The opening song was marvelous- awful, but great. The more badly done this was, the funny it became. very funny slapstick.
The parrot just leveled me-lol.
Although a LW, hysterical.

If you work more on technical apsects, you could really do something awesome.

I have to admit that I totally cracked up many times watching this film. Very funny. The triple twin segment was my particular favorite segment. And you even wrote a song for the film, cool.

However, your production values need some serious work for your next entry. The lighting is not good, and very yellow. Invest in a couple of cheap lights beyond that which lights the room should help. And I could hear the camera pause buttons and zoom buttons many times. Also you need to tighten up your editing.

However for the lightweights, you get my vote!