I actually liked this. It was very \"Dream-esque\" in oddness. I thought that it began really slow, and the walking shots were not needed, but once the bathroom scene hit, it was interesting until the end. The blood looked pretty real too. So, kudos to you guys on that. While I thought the pun at the end was kind of funny, I could see it coming a mile away. That\'s about my only complaint.
Nice job, guys, keep submitting stuff.
I\'ve had a similar nightmare like this so many times with my teeth just falling out. The blood and gore! I\'m glad I wasn\'t eating while watching it. Nothing wrong with this film at all. Good lighting, subtle soundtrack, and good acting.
Great opening shot. It's ND's illegitimate brother! Nice shot composition.
Hehe-- I like the random toothpaste tube shot.
Very cool concept-- I've never heard of a nightmare like that before but I can see how it'd suck.
The blood doesn't look that great, but it still works for this. I mean, the blood in your nightmare may look exactly like that!
Hah. Great line. Cheesy, but it fits this short.
This one was really good, had some audio problems, but made up for it with the storyline. This has my HW vote so far.
A decent entry, you had some lighting issues especially with the closeup of the main actor. The guy saying "cat got your tongue" and his laugh were definitely creeping me out, so good job on that one!! That part was my favorite.
It was kind of a slow movement into the bathroom to get him to start brushing his teeth, but things picked up from there. Some "air hissing" sound problems that I think you could have editing out with a little more work.
NICE.
truely unexpected
\"GET OUT OF YER HIDING SHELL\" and make more films:)
-Kyle
wow, i really enjoyed this! the razors were a great idea, and i thought the blood actually looked good. ive had a dream similar to this one, and i was definately feeling it the whole time. great job@
your first film... this should be interesting...
watch the camera noises!! those are veeeery bad! except for the weird and stupid ending, this was decently made. the razor part was VERY effective, and starling at the same time. good job, good luck next time.
that was a quirky choice of music. it brought some comedy into the film and was appreciated. i totally saw that joke coming, but still laughed when the line was delivered. i didnt expect the older guy to sound so loony. hehe. i dug it. i thought it the blood part could have been trimmed down, but you still made the time limit, so no prob. did he pull a reall razor blade out of his mouth? dangerous!!! good flick. it made me happy.
I liked this, i thought it was funny when the guy over exagerated putting the tooth bruch is his mouth. The whole blood thing worked out well.
good entry
Great editing, and use of angles. I thought the scene with the brush was awesome. The chunk of meat on the blade was a nice touch. The older actor was a good contrast to the dark feel of the first half. When his laugh was in slow motion I cracked up.
Overall great entry.
I love it. Really great. It made my girlfriend scream when she saw it. Really gross, creepy, and short. Good job. I like this one best so far.
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