That was cool, I really liked the hallway scene. Your directing isn\'t ordinary, which is good. I like alot of the shots, but what brought you down was the 2nd half. It felt re-used. I noticed alot of the crawling shot were redundant.

Your audiofor the 1st half was nice and subtly really did blend well but when it came to the 2nd half it was to loud and out of placed. It just didnt feel right for a chase.

Was this filmed on a webcam?
That background hissing really bothers me combined with the static shot movements.
The camera is clicking on every shot too, I\'m assuming this is just a cheap camera / webcam.

You have the right idea of a horror film with (some) music, and close ups / shot movements. But overall, I didn\'t see much point in this film...at all.

Wow-- this is like camera phone frame rate and sound.

This had a very rough start, but as he got up and walked out it really picked up well.

Good chaotic nightmare-ish vibe. I think this group really showed some potential with this short.

Technically, a lot needed to improve, but, as simple as it was, it kept a nice creepy pace to it.

Um, dude, did you steal a Canon Powershot and use the movie feature to film this or something? Sound and lighting. You know you can do better.

i dunno, i couldnt really catch alot of dialogue, it was very quiet and there was some kind of feedback on the camera i think.

the hallway shot was very cool though, i really liked that.

the sudden quick shots as hes crawling away is really cool too, it added alot to it.

it was really dark for the most part, so i think thats something you can work on though.