Audio, audio, audio! I can barely hear it! I don\'t know why so many people have trouble understanding they need to boost their levels so they\'re actually audible. Check the levels with other films, an easy fix that could make a world of difference, since this isn\'t a bad submission.

Lots of annoying noise.

The medium/close shots were framed well. The wide shot was framed way too high.

I think you pieced it together well-- it had some fairly seamless cuts.

Hehe-- I like this one. Very funny. Short and nicely done!

All I hear is the camera :(

as with what everyone else has said so far, the audio is awful. theres some kind of feedback, and i can barely hear what the characters are saying.

I *really* like this idea. The biggest problem with it is audio. I\'d suggest an external mic or dubbing in the voices after the fact. I love the punchline, too. The sequence in the snow is very well done. I\'d probably suggest trimming the part leading up to the snow scene a bit, too. Overall, great vid and great idea!

Ok, acting wasn\'t bad. I was actually able to kind of venture into your little world that is Penny Dog Productions. Downside, I\'m not big on lil\' skits like this. I prefer actual stories. This was more of tension leading up to a punch line. A video-joke, if you will. The editing could\'ve been a little tighter and the sound...ughh...the sound. I had to turn it up so loud that my ears exploded when I got an IM. FIX THAT! Otherwise, enjoyable to watch.